Incredible art there. Who made it?
The Rinzler comic version of the 1974 draft made several arguable errors - for instance, George Lucas in 1974 almost certainly imagined Annikin Starkiller with dark hair (like Jeffrey Hunter in The Searchers, vs. blond-haired romantic foil Clieg Whitsun) and Prince Valorum as black (a literal “black knight” & a precursor to James Earl Jones’ Vader).