The overall sound is much improved but personally I think the it flows better without the extra Snoke line.
I’m going to have to agree here: it was better without the “I’ve felt it” line.
I think it’s clear that, in Snoke saying that “there’s been an awakening,” that (obviously) he felt it. No need to include the extra dialogue to get that point across.
Also Neverar, I actually preferred the music in the previous version (66) than in this new version (67). The best part in my opinion was that, in that first overhead shot of the forest, the music sounds quite bleak as Snoke says, “There’s been an awakening” and “The Dark Side.” But then — ah ha! — a light! As the forest begins to light up, the tone of the music changes to a much more optimistic melody, just as Snoke says, “And the Light.”
In your newer update, the music is too jolly throughout the entire sequence and I feel like it diminishes the difference between the darkness and the light, which is revealed when Rey looks up and sees the Falcon.
If I had a choice, I would say go back to 66 in almost every way. It was an excellent execution, with perhaps only a few sound effects tweaks needed.
Either way, great work. I just preferred (order) 66.