Another version. I think it sounds a bit better.
https://mega.nz/#!KdkXzIbS!3sc-75YFln-CKefaUOIdNvsNOwRtpAjo9sp7wZycvEc
Perhaps this is good enough, I don’t want to take over the thread with mother-edits when we don’t even know if Adywan is interested.
I think that’s great, though the “mother” portion seems to have less body than the rest of the sentence.
If Adywan does happen to chime in to express disinterest in this for his edit, feel free to move it to my ‘Custom SE’ thread. 😃