The latest version is great, although it needs more of the Vader robotic voice. Although maybe just being in context would help it fit a lot better. The one at the end of the last page wasn’t all that bad, maybe that helped it.
Post #1298170
- Author
- SparkySywer
- Parent topic
- STAR WARS: EP VI -RETURN OF THE JEDI "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - ** PRODUCTION HAS NOW RESTARTED **
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1298170/action/topic#1298170
- Date created
- 24-Sep-2019, 3:49 PM