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Post #1298070

Author
Darth Giacomo
Parent topic
Star Wars Episode 1: The Phantom Menace re-written
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Date created
24-Sep-2019, 12:23 AM
Last modified
24-Sep-2019, 12:27 AM
Edited by
Darth Giacomo
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I intend to edit as many of these changes as possible into the movie and try to obtain funding for some actual new scenes later. For now, I plan to go past the prelude of the race tomorrow after school. I hope to at least get up to the party returning to Alderaan. I’ll probably be able to finish it the day after. After that, I’m going to go through and give the film’s characters more of that personality, charm and banter that the original trilogy is loved for. Of course, I’ll implement changes based on feedback the whole way through. Especially for dialogue, as I am very bad at writing it. Oh, and a lot of these “new scenes” are just very obscure deleted scenes. If anyone can find them, that would be greatly appreciated and much easier than filming new material. Enjoy the script!