That “So” might could use some work, but it is already pretty great!
Though I still think you should keep Finn deflecting his gaze from Han, which unintentionally signals his lie.
Post #1297111
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- RogueLeader
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- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- Date created
- 17-Sep-2019, 1:52 AM