Re: Bail’s apartment, just literally last week I changed where that scene is in my edit to before Palpatine appoints Anakin, and I fixed that error by cutting the line and just having him say “Now the Chancellor has appointed governors…”
One thing that just occurred to me, not that it should have any impact on your edit necessarily, is that Anakin being late to the briefing must have originally been placed after he reunites with Padme (“I’ll meet you at the briefing” being what Obi-wan says when they part, plus this is the only thing that’d actually explain why they had him be late).