I really don’t feel like the balcony scene serves a purpose unless it’s immediately followed by the nightmare sequence. It’s supposed to be a sort of “calm before the storm”. An idyllic moment before the inciting incident (the nightmare sequence in the original ROTS). I also hope you trim some of the dialogue in that sequence, particularly the “love has blinded you?” bit.
Post #1296216
- Author
- Octorox
- Parent topic
- Star Wars Episode III: Labyrinth Of Evil (Released)
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- Date created
- 10-Sep-2019, 1:50 PM