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Post #1295848

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TK42-WAN
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The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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Date created
8-Sep-2019, 7:27 PM

snooker said:

major changes:

-more dynamic camera operation for a less boring viewing experience
-Amidala’s voice is shifted up
-Gunray speaks alien language
-Restructured scenes heavily

https://streamable.com/du5zz

Does anyone have any ideas for an alternate, non-gungan way to reveal Amidala’s queenship before this scene?

Great work. I’d ditch the line “we have a plan that should immobilise the droid army” and go straight to “we’ll send what pilots we have” using the CU of Anakin to mask the cut. To me, sending fighters to attack the control ship sounds half baked as far as plans go.