Needless to say, I’d like a comment, especially about the Naboo addition. 😉
Honestly, it looks more like they’re celebrating than panicking and being scared. Maybe you can zoom in to make it look more like there’s crowds gathering to see what’s going on, with some panicked shouting and all that added in? Also, maybe you can add a color-corrected-to-green shot of a laser beam shot by Starkiller Base in the Alderaan edit, as well as some new shots in this standalone edit?