Just watched your edit, good work. I like the concept. Do you plan any alterations for the second version? If so, here are three thoughts that crossed my mind. Maybe start with Windu and the jedi confronting Palpatine, so it doesn’t feel rushed. Possibly include Order 66, to explain why Kenobi said his clones turned on him and why the clones attacked the jedi temple. Adding the deleted scene of Yoda landing on Dagobah to show where all three went into hiding at.
Post #1295531
- Author
- t7thl
- Parent topic
- Revenge of the Sith - Abridged (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1295531/action/topic#1295531
- Date created
- 6-Sep-2019, 10:45 AM