That is a really good point! I think this battle between logic and story is one we’ve discussed quite a bit before. In this case I do think you’re right that it is probably better for the story to be introduced to these things earlier on to set the groundwork for act 3.

Another little thing I think would be a nice, but not necessary, consideration would be to add a quick OS First Order line where they specifically mention Hosnian Prime/System, since it never gets mentioned in this version. Just something simple, like, “Targeting Hosnian Prime”, during one of the First Order control room scenes would be enough to where the Republic capital is stated as not being Coruscant in the film itself.

I hope I’m not bombarding you with ideas. My new commute is a pretty long one, so it gives a bit of time to think! I certainly want to concentrate on giving you feedback regarding whatever your current focus is.