I couldnt sleep tonight and so I had some extra time on my hands. I went ahead and made some mock-ups of Trooperman's crawl for y'all to look over. I honestly haven't read this whole thread and there may be quite a bit that Trooperman has changed since he posted his example crawl, but it was what I used to get the wording.

Let me know what you think. I think I remember reading that there wasn't going to be an episode number which would be easily fixed, but wasn't there something about changing the pan in the beginning? I thought Trooperman was going to change it so the camera panned down instead of up, then again my memory may be playing tricks on me. In case I do remember correctly, I turned the star background upside-down so that it would mesh with the rest of the upside-down video. I can change that too if it is wrong.

Here are the example (re-edited) shots:

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a8/Rebel11_38/860bad2a.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a8/Rebel11_38/90bcadce.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a8/Rebel11_38/98b9aa10.jpg

Hope they meet with approval.