That crawl is way too wordy. Here’s my idea:
It is a time of despair.
Luke Skywalker, the legendary
Jedi Master, has vanished.
In his absence, the sinister
First Order has risen, wielding
a deadly weapon capable of
destroying any star system
in the galaxy.
Held hostage by this dreaded
threat, the New Republic
organizes a covert Resistance
to find Skywalker and destroy
the First Order…