Thanks Starkiller AG! Totally missed that.

I feel like it is really coming together, Nev! I know this is more of a test for the order of scenes, but did you want any technical notes? Or just focus on how the current structure feels?

I like the inclusion of the whispers in Rey’s second mind trick attempt! Where did you get the whispers from? And I like the children’s laughter in Falcon search scene. I think any extra dose of sympathy of Kylo we can get before his confrontation with Han helps make that moment hurt even more. Though I do think the Stormtrooper saying “Ship’s clear” could be replaced. Feels like temp dialogue, plus most of the troops have American accents.

I also think where you placed that scene feels very natural to me. Doesn’t stick out to me at all. Are you planning on adding anything to the sky when Kylo looks outside the Falcon?