Well, the time for suggestions for TAS is past, but I welcome your thoughts anyway.
I don’t think it’s a problem to only have Anakin list two qualities. When Padmé asks about love, he merely contrasts it with possession, then goes on to use a preferred term.
I am skeptical that lowering the pitch of Jar Jar’s voice would be seamless with all the ambient sounds and music; I couldn’t even begin to apply it well to Amidala in COD.