This is a good ambitious edit, and I understand that much of your time right now is working on a house. Totally get it!
As for this recent clip, I see you got some work cut out for ya to remove the time stamp and Rey in the “Map” room.
after watching it a few times, I like the direction it is going. I appreciate the scene effect during her “Vision Dream.”
I am not a skilled editer, but I am curious if maybe instead of that effect you did, would it be possible to add a little more of a grain affect as well as changing the coloring in those scenes? Maybe less color and more of a sepia or something that shows this is indeed a vision?
Also, earlier during Rey’s Vision during the lightsaber touch at Maz’s castle can have the same effect so it will accomplish two things: 1.) these force visions have the same “effect” on the screen and 2.) we know Rey is having some kind of vision at the end with Luke on the island.
Other than that, the rest of it is looking good! Just a thought I had.