I would recommend the following changes:
After Hux says, “We have them tied on the end of a string,” cut to Kylo entering the throne room and Snoke saying “Tied on a string indeed.”
Move the deleted scene of Luke mourning Han’s death to right after he says, “Where’s Han”
Cut the Tie Fighters shooting the bridge and Leia blasting into space and flying back
Cut Finn and Rose’s subplot and Poe and Holdo’s subplot
Reinstate the caretaker scenes and Luke’s third lesson
Replace Holdo with Admiral Ackbar in the hyperspace Kamikaze attack (borrowing shots from Ivan Ortega)
Re-edit Finn’s sacrifice so that an AT-AT shoots down Rose, Finn tries to sacrifice himself, then an AT-AT shoots him down.
That goes against all of Hal’s intentions for this edit. If you want those changes, you should make your own edit.