I was impressed by how the scene played without Rey interpreting for Chewie, but I’ll see what I think in a while.
Maz’s comment and Rey asking about a cowl are both part of the film’s sexual undertones. I still really dislike the entire Maz scene, but if it must be kept then I want to keep the sexual humor.
Rey’s question to Ren is another example of her being somewhat prudish or new to sexuality, just like how she looks away from the walrus that Luke milks.
Can you post what it would look like with the interpretation to see?
As for the Cowl scene, I’m personally neutral on it, so with our without it is the same to me, so trust your judgment on that one!
As for the Maz scene, seriously, if the whole thing can be removed that would be a god send.