Well, here’s my full raw list I’m working from:
[Possibly remove audio for line “I’m not sure how much longer I can hold off the vote, my friends”
Readd the last part of Jar Jar introducing the jedi at Padmé’s HQ
Fix lack of audio channel 6 from 9:41ish to 12:06ish, perhaps just lazily copying channel 5]
[Put in “easy Jedi business go back to your drinks
[Try to remedy the abrupt scene end after “But I am grown up - You said it yourself”]
Include abbreviated Dex’s Diner, and original zam death line
[Place lines from Jamila scene about staying in the lake country to refugee transport scene]
[Fix the audio during landing platform deleted scene which abruptly goes to 2.0 stereo; the beginnig and end of the scene are okay]
Consider suggestion about ep2 continuity error from using lake house to establish Padme’s family house
[Consider using Mala’s version of Anakin leaving to look for Schmi, which has no dialogue]
Undo Dooku’s modified line of “a thousand more systems”
Replace 3PO’s line about never having flown before.
[Maybe reorder scenes like Q2 has it for where the droid factory used to be]
[Put in Yoda saying he is going to go visit Kamino]
[Put back in Mace sneaking up on Dooku in ep2]
[Look into TMTYC’s recreation of the Jedi reveal in the arena from AOTP]
There is a shot of Anakin in pain from lightning that should be moved away from right before Padmé in the sand to just before leaping to save Obi-Wan
Fix video glitch in middle of end credits
C-3PO’s line about never having flown before is ties into The Phantom Menace, where he says, “I can assure you that they’ll never get me onto one of those dreadful starships.”
He cut that line from that movie for his fanedit “Cloak of Deception” v6, while also adding a line of 3PO comparing some of his life experiences with R2’s, which gently implies some backstory to 3PO.
‘The Approaching Storm v6’ is a sequel to ‘Cloak of Deception v6’, not the theatrical TPM, I’m assuming.
Okay, I take that back. I would make two changes to V6:
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I would cut the Anakin-Padmé “Don’t look at me like that” exchange. The transition was already seamless in V5.
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I would cut the Dex Diner’s scene entirely and borrow the audio of Zam’s dying words from The Phantom Editor.