Well, here’s my full raw list I’m working from:
[Possibly remove audio for line “I’m not sure how much longer I can hold off the vote, my friends”
Readd the last part of Jar Jar introducing the jedi at Padmé’s HQ
Fix lack of audio channel 6 from 9:41ish to 12:06ish, perhaps just lazily copying channel 5]
[Put in “easy Jedi business go back to your drinks
[Try to remedy the abrupt scene end after “But I am grown up - You said it yourself”]
Include abbreviated Dex’s Diner, and original zam death line
[Place lines from Jamila scene about staying in the lake country to refugee transport scene]
[Fix the audio during landing platform deleted scene which abruptly goes to 2.0 stereo; the beginnig and end of the scene are okay]
Consider suggestion about ep2 continuity error from using lake house to establish Padme’s family house
[Consider using Mala’s version of Anakin leaving to look for Schmi, which has no dialogue]
Undo Dooku’s modified line of “a thousand more systems”
Replace 3PO’s line about never having flown before.
[Maybe reorder scenes like Q2 has it for where the droid factory used to be]
[Put in Yoda saying he is going to go visit Kamino]
[Put back in Mace sneaking up on Dooku in ep2]
[Look into TMTYC’s recreation of the Jedi reveal in the arena from AOTP]
There is a shot of Anakin in pain from lightning that should be moved away from right before Padmé in the sand to just before leaping to save Obi-Wan
Fix video glitch in middle of end credits
Why are you including Dex’s Diner? It is implausible a diner owner would be able to identify a toxic dart, and cutting the scene improves the pacing.
C-3PO’s line about never having flown before is ties into The Phantom Menace, where he says, “I can assure you that they’ll never get me onto one of those dreadful starships.”