I think I agree with that overall. I have a version of how the scene could go in my head, but it will probably be a little while before I am able to realize it in a mockup.
Bonus points for removing Rose getting excited about seeing the Fathiers. I imagine it would be more effective to merely see them react to the poor mistreatment of what are essentially space horses Van to set up a miniature Free Willy subplot for them.
Post #1287377
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- Hal 9000
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- The Last Jedi: Legendary (Released)
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- 1-Jul-2019, 4:23 PM