Thanks for the feedback oojason! Also, thank you for the tips about the music, I’ve been dabbling with “Your Father Would Be Proud” at the moment.
Here is a combined clip of Scenes 3 and 4. https://vimeo.com/344324725
Password is fanedit
EDIT: I found a sound glitch at 17-18 seconds in this clip after turning up the volume which has been fixed on the main source now.