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I haven’t watched the original sequence in a long time, so I can’t tell exactly what you’ve changed. And from that point of view I would say that it doesn’t feel edited or out of place. The thing I dislike the most is Padmé looking up followed by the shot of the molten metal filling the container, making it look like she was killed. It feels like a cheap trick. Aside from that I don’t like the whole video game feel of Padmé on the conveyor belt dodging various things one after another. Perhaps the sequence could be shortened more.