I included the full beginning of the Jedi Council scene, that’s right.
The scene plays very well. The balcony scene originally lead into Yoda’s counseling, and the following scene in which Anakin is late for a meeting, Obi-Wan is appropriately primed to be suspicious of Palpatine. I think the pacing sticks closer to the original film, much better than prior versions of LOE.
I noticed that it might be good to replace 3PO’s line, “I think I’m beginning to get the hang of this flying business” with something similarly spicy. It’s a callback to lines that will have been replaced in Episodes I and II: “I can assure you they will never get me onto one of those dreadful starships,” and “It’s just that I’ve never flown before.”
It’s not mandatory, but if there’s anything that seems appropriate to place there, it’d be nice to.