It just looks like to me you only did negative film stock emulation which is just a recreation of if it was shot on film, not projected on film.
If this were an authentic 35mm print recreation, wouldn’t you also want to emulate the look of a print such as Kodak 2283, which is the most frequently used print stock today?
What I used was Magic Bullet looks for reference, as well as some grading from other films from 35mm prints. The negative stock depended on the scene, for the dark night scenes, I used Kodak Vision 3 500T negative stock, while for the outdoor scenes I used either Vision 3 250D or 50D. The print stock was all 2838, since it looked the most appealing, and I decided that if it was a film shot on celluloid, they director and/or DP could have made the choice of print stock. Some things I had to CC manually, as they wouldn’t color correct naturally to the print stock. Examples are the ending WB logo and the Legendary Pictures logo.