The cut on the line, “We still can save him” feels a little weird initially, maybe because it cuts away as she is starting to talk. I know you’re kind of limited on how you can cut it, that’s just the one thing that stood out to me at first.
Post #1283427
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- RogueLeader
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- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- 30-May-2019, 2:31 PM