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Post #1282723

Author
Tsiskwa
Parent topic
HBO's Game of Thrones - Fan Edit Ideas
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Date created
24-May-2019, 3:16 PM

This scene still has so much wrong with it. Not due to your editing, mind you. But you’re not starting with choice material. It represents such a tonal shift from the previous scenes and makes little narrative sense. I’d argue for its removal altogether, (along with the small council scene), maybe find some other way to get to the ending montage, or change the ending entirely somehow.