Quite an interesting take on the start and pretty impressed on many of the edits which are rather bold and uncommon.

I think the brief ghost image of Vader’s melted helmet over Kylo’s helmet could be made a lot more convincing or done better. Maybe going into slow motion for that particular bit and then back to full speed after as he keeps smashing his helmet? That aside it is actually quite effective emotionally and a stroke of genius as to an insight to Kylo’s thoughts and feelings in that moment.

The other scene that obviously needs a lot of work still is the static images of the Resistance ships before we cut to Poe onboard - not convincing at all sorry if it was meant to be. I would reuse/repurpose existing footage for here. I think it also feels a little rushed in how quick Poe goes from being in the command room there to suddenly in his Xwing in front of the Dreadnaught.

Ive seen ForceGhostRecon’s edit and so I can already say that I really like many of the same VFX shots you included from his edit.

Will have to give the full edit a watch sometime to see what other interesting ways you have edited this movie. In the meantime, keep up the great work 😃