I think that’s fair, Ridley. Since all three are getting a V6, if you wish to encode them I can include the crawls as .mov files. 😃
Sounds good!
Edit: Here’s the best I’ve gotten so far. (Audio is very temporary and not spruced up.) I’m not sure if this line is confusing, but the intention is that R2 and 3PO have been comparing notes of their various histories, not talking about a shared history. Might be too confusing. The last shot is a little packed, but removing the last phrase makes it too short. 😕
I think the line feels a bit out of place. Reminiscing about the past doesn’t really add anything at that point in the story, and it does sound like he’s talking about a shared history. It might be easier said than done, but could you perhaps modify the original line instead? To something like:
“You know, space travel is rather perilous. I can assure you they will never get me onto one of those dreadful starships again."