I really like what you have done here. I do think a jarring wake up right after she holds the lightsaber out and luke spins to see her is critical to bring it all together, it can just be a zoom in with her eyes snapping open. Then R2 can “wake” and then Rey can be in that meeting with the map because she already is awake and the following scene will establish how she will get there to Ahch-to.
Post #1282042
- Author
- BleuAsh
- Parent topic
- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1282042/action/topic#1282042
- Date created
- 18-May-2019, 1:11 PM