I was thrilled with this edit. On an objective, technical level, I don’t think I would have known it was a fanedit if I hadn’t seen the official version before (or the fanedit disclaimer at the beginning). You made lots of smart choices that eliminated the things I hated most about ROTS and kept nearly all of the good, plus improved flow (especially the opening battle through the crash landing) and other improvements.

My ONLY nitpicks would be purely-subjective preferences over what bits to cut & what to leave in, But ultimately, this will be my go-to version of ROTS for the foreseeable future. Thanks, and great job!