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Post #1280075

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SomethingStarWarsRelated
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SSWR's Attack of the Clones - Alternate Timeline Edit (WIP)
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Date created
6-May-2019, 12:15 AM

Alright another clip:
https://youtu.be/w4mvbRCT5VQ

Ideas going on here (besides ideas I’ve mentioned previously):
Keep in mind: This is really their proper first scene together.

  • Mention of Anakin going through the window. Hopefully I can find someone to help me pull this off.
  • A new history between Anakin and Padme eluded to. It hasn’t been 10 years.
  • It’s more apparent that Padme’s interested in him but is still all about her job.
  • More straightening out Anakin’s story (including motivations). Also setting up Ben as teaching him but no mention of Master/Apprentice
  • There’s still a hickup that I’m trying to iron out. “Although I seem to recall your views on the Jedi’s code” The dialogue before and after…well…it’s hard tying it altogether. I’m trying to start with something general about the Jedi and segue into it being about Padme’s concern for Anakin’s safety…but also trying to keep some subtext going. Eh. That’s why the lipsync especially sucks right here. I just decided to go ahead and post it. Thoughts anyone?
  • Didn’t originally plan on leaving the creepy Anakin stare at the end but I thought it worked in the new context of the scene.
  • The music is temp too…but I just listened to Anakin’s theme from TPM soundtrack for the first time recently…I didn’t realize how OT sounding it was. Love it.