SomethingStarWarsRelated said:
I just came across this short video:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6N0P-qsXxUYI like shot composition better shows how the death star is not yet in range. Plus the extra fighters.
The composition is nice but the CGI is very basic and dated (basic light, depth of field and materials).
For decent CGI take a look at “Star Wars: Destroyer - A Star Wars Fan-Film” or “The Lost Starfighter - Star Wars Fan Film”. Your own Falcon replacement was also quite good.