IlFanEditore said:
Does anyone have suggestions?

That’s a brilliant clip, great pacing and just the right amount of dialog. Music is spot on too.
But the background noise on the voices breaks it. So you might be forced to stay with Obi-wan and Mace a bit longer just because of that. It’s very hard to remove that background noise…

But showing them more will make it harder to change the dialog… Anyway, perhaps you can find some usable dialog in games ? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1lxFz6lguyU