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Post #1278053

Author
SomethingStarWarsRelated
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SSWR's Attack of the Clones - Alternate Timeline Edit (WIP)
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Date created
17-Apr-2019, 1:23 PM
Last modified
17-Apr-2019, 2:24 PM
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SomethingStarWarsRelated
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I finished this next clip sooner than expected.

https://youtu.be/2C9f1GyX4IQ

Let me know what you think!

I’ll let you know what I was going for:

-Added line from palace scene specifically for the “isolated” line. I don’t like the palace scene but that line sort of helps further the idea that they’ll be safer from any bounty hunting.
-Tried adding some chemistry between these two.
-Padme smiles more.
-Anakin attempts some humor (also slightly referencing original complaints about Anakin’s creepy stare…BUT is it still too creepy to leave in in this instance?)
-Tried to make Anakin a bit more “cool” if you will, with the way he speaks to Padme. In the original, he just seems too try to hard to make her like him.
-Leaving “Jedi love” rules a bit vague on purpose…making this more about Windu’s personal take on the Jedi Scriptures furthering Anakin VS Windu idea for the edit.

Is this scene working? Did anything feel “off”?