Finished the latest set of touch-ups to the script. They are as follow:
- Krypton is now identified as Krypton (figured keeping the planet’s name a mystery was pointless)
- Kara/Linda has been changed to Luma-Lyn (a character inspired by Luma Lynai)
- Mrs. Bogdanove is now Miss Maggin
- Lana’s mother’s name has been changed from Carol to Sarah (the character’s name pre-Crisis)
- Lana’s father’s name has been changed from Thomas to Lewis (ditto)
- Nell’s name has been changed to Helen (the character’s name post-Crisis)
- Removed Luthor’s scenes (I’ve decided to place his introduction in Act II instead)
I’ve also decided to retool my original plot somewhat. I’ve decided against making Luthor a military officer; I’ll be making him a weapons scientist/defense conglomerate magnate instead. Also, Brainiac won’t be making an appearance; a different character will serve as secondary antagonist (I won’t reveal who just yet).
My apologies for these disorienting changes.