Finished the latest set of touch-ups to the script. They are as follow:

Krypton is now identified as Krypton (figured keeping the planet’s name a mystery was pointless)
Kara/Linda has been changed to Luma-Lyn (a character inspired by Luma Lynai)
Mrs. Bogdanove is now Miss Maggin
Lana’s mother’s name has been changed from Carol to Sarah (the character’s name pre-Crisis)
Lana’s father’s name has been changed from Thomas to Lewis (ditto)
Nell’s name has been changed to Helen (the character’s name post-Crisis)
Removed Luthor’s scenes (I’ve decided to place his introduction in Act II instead)

I’ve also decided to retool my original plot somewhat. I’ve decided against making Luthor a military officer; I’ll be making him a weapons scientist/defense conglomerate magnate instead. Also, Brainiac won’t be making an appearance; a different character will serve as secondary antagonist (I won’t reveal who just yet).

My apologies for these disorienting changes.