Wow, that’s some great work, NeverAr! It’d be sad to lose Han’s hilarious line “If I get any higher they’ll see us!”
Well the impetus for the cuts in that scene was more to do with the time spent away from Rey than any humorous content; because her two escape attempts happened on either side of that scene I didn’t want the crash to be so involved that it sapped significant tension from the escape.
Hopefully the feeling of this scene is more akin to a car crash - violent, out of control, and over before anyone can really react.