What has not yet been decided is whether the audio track will be a time expanded version of the original (which was from a VHS source), or a native NTSC track replacement. I currently have access to a nice PCM recording from the Definitive Collection thanks to Arnie.d

I was hoping to host the 2nd version of this clip on my own since some people have problems with RapidShare, but it's currently not possible.
This clip is before I started thinking Picture Framing, and the audio is the original time expanded (with BeSweet) re-encoded to a low bitrate AC3 (for internet transfer ease).

Just a couple things, when you say "time expand" the audio, you do mean slow down by 4%, not actually "time strectching" which is what time expanding implies. You definitely want to pitch shift it down by 4%. Just checking, as it sounds like it was pitch shifted in your video clip, which would be correct.

Also I personally think that the colour/saturation is a bit too much, the faces of the rebels look rather a little too sunburnt and the white walls are starting to look a little pink, but of course this is subjective so its your call there. Maybe shifting the hue towards blue a little more would help, even though the official DVD is WAY to Blue, I think too blue is better than too red.