I’m sorry to change the subject but I just saw your updated version of Rey’s dream.

You’re going to hate me for saying it, but I’m just still not sold on it yet.

Things I like:

I like the nighttime shots
I like the Rey voice
I like the music choice

Things I don’t like:

I can’t hear a single sentance in the collage of audio during this sequence
The wall of days is on there for way too long (I know you said it was a stand in)

I know that I previously said the sequence was revealing too much too soon, but now I feel like it reveals nothing at all! The only thing that I feel is really important to this sequence is something about the island. Yes, a drawing of the island might work, as long as it’s clear that’s what it is.

Otherwise, maybe split second video clips? Like just a few frames of the island flash onto the screen, just to give the audience the visual of what Rey is seeing.

Like:

Shot of Rey asleep
The voices / scary sounds
3 frames of unkar
Back to Rey sleeping (maybe an eye twitches… not sure how that would be possible)
3 frames of the island
Back to Rey sleeping

Etc.

I don’t know. As of right now, they Reydream is still my favorite in terms of how it looks. It’s so simple and yet so curious.

You’re doing good work.