Amazing Idea!

But I think as of now it’s way too fast and too montagey. I think it could use a lot of work in terms of the music cues, pacing, tone, and transitions. But there is SOOO much potential!

This is just me but as an audience member I need to feel like this is Rey’s happy place. We need to really hear the waves and sounds of the island more. This is somewhere she has always dreamed of being. The total opposite of Jakku. Tonally it needs to really bring something to the edit, rather than just a montage of TLJ clips.

Also I’m definitly a fan of hearing Unkar Plutt’s voice, but I’m not so sure about Maz’s, I feel like it’s a little too out of place and ineffective. So excited for this scenes potential though.

IDEA: At the end of the movie when she arrives at Ach-To and shes staring at the waves, I feel the same music cues from whatever you use in this should re-appear in that scene as well.