I think it does seem like at least there a few different options for how you might want to rearrange the dialogue. I have to agree and say as long as the whole mention of Snoke is removed, it will feel a lot better.

Also, while the story does seem to make it out that it is all Snoke’s fault, I think it makes Leia seem more mature if she doesn’t just immediately blame Snoke for corrupting Ben, and that she partly blames herself for what has happened to him. And so does Han, I think.

If Han still says “Snoke only wants to use you for your power”, it still shows that Han and Leia were aware of Snoke, so I don’t think removing that earlier mention of him really hurts anything.