I like it a lot. You cut L3 just right, where her personality is still similar, but she’s not so annoying. The color correction is subtle, but works pretty well.
Cutting so much of the beginning felt kind of strange at first, but I see why you did it. It makes Han’s past more mysterious as it doesn’t show why he has to leave Corellia or who exactly is chasing him. The title card seems to go a bit too quick though, where you’ll almost miss it if you blink.
Overall I’d say this is pretty good, especially for a first edit, and fixes some of the problems with, what I think is, an underrated Star Wars movie.