Thank you!
The edit is in progress, and probably won’t be released for quite some time due to the number of edit’s I’m still working on.
As for the TIE crash, I can see your sequence working, but you’d have to lose the scene of the female officer informing Hux of the impending crash. I’m working on some ideas for that scene right now though, and it might be worth losing that bit.
JEDIT: Here’s a somewhat rough mockup of a much earlier concept - the First Order has visited the crash site before Finn wakes up and has left a probe droid behind:
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What it really needs is a decent establishing shot of the droid.