Holy shit. I’m really diggin that.
It makes sense to have the shots in that order. You kind of recontextualize the “The Resistance will not be intimidated by you” line in a way that feels even more relevant. Like Kylo is trying to break his will in order get to the truth.

Also, did you add Kylo saying “Agreed”? That’s genius. I mean you can argue it isn’t needed but I feel like that is appropriate with his attitude.

That BB-8 shot is the best one by far you could’ve used. And yeah, like you said, even though most people probably know that he gave it to BB-8, I think it would still work as a nice little reveal and make it to where you’re not reusing any shots.

I’m still not sure what would be the best way to present those images, if they should be briefer flashes, or if they should be distorted in some way, but I like the direction you’re going in.