you mean this?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3kCpa9sotvE
In fact, there are some things that should be well managed,
Vader’s armor, too shiny on the Death Star, too dull on Endor, looks like a carnival suit. Too little menace.
Jerryod’s conflict would be a good example. I like it!
Lukes departure from the Death Star with the shuttle, here I would have liked a Tie interceptor, since he has to disappear quickly, once again with Luke Skywalker fly at a rapid pace, one last time, as in Ep.4 the flight through the ditch, I think this ego is great.
Sound technically, more reverberation in the throne room, especially with laughter of the Emperor, more menace.
More insights into, and on the death star, where are the works on the Death Star? Where are the construction vessels, welding work, material convoys, too little work in and on the Death Star can be seen.
Lift scene, with Vader as well as, the deleted elevator scene of ep.4 can be incorporated to highlight the dimensions of the death star
The Sarlacc, I think everyone agrees, even if it’s a plant, it should be new, as well, should the audio on the Sarlacc be revised, just at the fight. Jabba’s people seem like little boys, 0 threats.
Space battle, more emotions, more speed, more ships, you want to fly along, more cockpit views from the cockpit, maybe a few pieces of debris, a long battle.
Surely there is more, maybe another time