Nev, also wanted to ask you about this scene rearrangement. It makes a lot of sense, actually, especially when going back and looking at the original order.
Wanted to suggest a few options though.
One issue with this restructure is that you would lose the nice hard cut going from Finn in a mask to Rey in hers. It’s a really great moment that would be a bit of a shame to lose.
Another option would be to put Poe’s ineterrogation and Finn’s rescue one after the other. A hard cut might be too sudden, but possibly a wipe, or coming up with some kind of buffer shot could help with that. Maybe if you removed Poe waking up in the interrogation room and moved it to right before Finn enters, it would give the two scenes a few seconds of breathing room. Just an idea though.