OP updated with the new sample (Chewie Saves Han), with a credit to GeoMFilms for his contribution
Very nice edit. I wish i was next to a computer (im on cell) there is a tweak or two id like to see if it works. But yea very nice edit.
If i was next to p.c. id like to see if it flows well if we dont show stormtroopers until kylo says something about “your son is dead”. When he says that show the part where chewie looks backwards…and instead of looking up at finn and rey edit to showing troopers entering the room.
Then maybe edit to showing a close up of kylos hand igniting lightsaber (from the scene with kylo slashes at the computer screens. Would have to digitally change the background to look like kylo is on bridge) than go back to chewie yelling know they being betrayed and have him fire at kylo.
I wish i had time to edit it myself right now but this is just an idea