Thanks!

It’s been a while since any updates here, but now I have funds for computer upgrades and hope to resume progress soon.

In the meantime, here’s another crawl for your consideration, again taking some liberties with the canon and geography:

War has scarred the galaxy.
Between the remnants of the
Empire and the new Republic
lies a barren, lawless rift.

Working in secret from
across this dark expanse,
agents of the Empire have
destroyed the Republic’s
first and most noble order,
the mystical Jedi Knights,
and in their place have
declared themselves to be
the true FIRST ORDER.

Believing the leader of the
Jedi still lives, one Republic
general mobilizes a covert
RESISTANCE to search
the barren rift for the last
protector of peace and
justice amid the darkening
stars…

JEDIT: An updated version that is closer to the original, while still retaining some of these ideas:

Luke Skywalker has vanished.
In his absence, hope for the
return of the Jedi Knights
is fading.

Without the protection
of this sacred order, the
Senate of the Republic
is infiltrated by sinister
agents advocating the
return of the Empire and
proclaiming it to be the
true FIRST ORDER of the
galaxy.

Fearing for the Republic’s
very soul, one general
forms a covert RESISTANCE
to this threat and sends
her most daring pilot in
search of the last Jedi
among the darkening
stars…