It needs a laugh track and more structure. Each episode should have a theme, it looks a bit too random like this.
But it’s interesting and well dubbed 😃
Thank you! I don’t know if you saw the original icons but i did name this ‘TNG Sitcom Redub’ but changed it to ‘TNG Comedy Redub’ I know these edits are all about comedy but i wanted to avoid putting a laugh track. I’ve seen others do it with other videos but i didn’t want it for this.
As far as mini stories…its in there, but yeah they very minor small stories. Like the fist Picards sick…why? we find out why. Geordi needs money…makes youtube video… wonders if its good enough to make money…crew says its not.
2nd episode Wesley keeps playing video games. His mom says she’ll bring an end to that. Plus Data finds out Geordi broke up with girlfriend…tries to steal her. Geordi gets girl back and all is forgive.
Very silly and short…but i’ve done longer actual story drive humor edits that are like 20-30min long. But i barely would get clicks. I would spend months on those. So i wanted to try something shorter and more straight joke after joke and see what the response to that would be. I do want to have stories though…without anything specific to follow then it gets boring. So thank you for the feedback.